Develop persuasive vocabulary with a ‘biased words knockout challenge’


One important literacy skill is for students to use (and, increasingly, to spot) writing which is designed to persuade rather than merely inform. To do this, get students to produce a list of biased adjectives and then set up  quick-fire competition: each member of the class has to take it in turns to contribute a fresh word to the shared list without hesitation or repetition. Students failing to do so have to sit down, with the overall winner being the last person left standing. The pool of words can then be left on the board for students to draw from in their written piece.

Case Study

At the end of a detailed study of why William of Normandy won the Battle of Hastings in 1066, I ask students to take a basic written account of the event and transform it into a biased newspaper report. The account they are given as a starting point is written in a dry present-tense format. In Stage 1 of the activity, students first use their word processors to convert this into one neat paragraph of text – using punctuation and linkage words as appropriate to make the narrative ‘flow’. They might end up with something like this (past tense highlighted in red, linkage words in blue):


In Stage 2, they are put into two teams (Anglo-Saxons and Normans) ready to insert some bias into the narrative: “good” words about their favoured ruler, “bad” words about his enemy, and asked to start constructing a list of positive and negative adjectives:

Group A: An Anglo-Saxon newspaper. This will see the defeat of Harold as a terrible disaster. It will talk about how brilliant Harold was, and how William was cruel, evil, and only won because of luck.
Group B: A Norman newspaper. This will see William’s victory as a good thing. It was talk about how evil and stupid Harold was, and say that William was clever and deserved the throne all along.

The biased word knockout challenge

At this point, students are told how the game will work. Each student will be given five minutes to produce a list of positive adjectives, then a further couple of minutes to memorise as many of them as possible. Then, the whole class stands up and the teacher makes it clear who will start by giving the first word, and then the order that other students will follow (it therefore helps to have students standing in a ring as far as this is possible). The teacher then invites the first person to start. The teacher repeats the word, writes it on the board, and then points to the next person to continue. Any student who hesitates, or repeats a word already on the board, has to sit down. Repeat the process until there is one overall winner left standing.

Then, immediately move to round two (the “bad” words). This time, start with the person who came last in the ‘ring’ in the previous round, and work around the group in the opposite direction, to keep things fair.

At the end of the process, students will be left with a list of useful words to make use of in their final piece of persuasive writing, both positive and negative.

Taking it further

As well as incorporating adjectives, more able students could add adverbs too. A final piece of writing making use of the vocabulary from the knockout challenge might look like this (before of course the obligatory adding of images, an alliterative headline, and then some coffee-stain and bake-in-the-oven history goodness):



“History in your pocket”: Coins as sources


This great idea was developed from an idea shared by @histHartford. This photo comes from Mr. Atkinson (@AtkoHistory) and was shared to the #historyteacher hashtag on Twitter by @EllenWicks:


Taking it further

Students should be encouraged to bring in coins and banknotes from their foreign travels at the start of the Autumn term.

This concept also ties in well with the “Where are the women? Design / Destroy a Banknote” exercise.


Student bookmark: Key vocabulary for essay writing


I have designed the following bookmark in order to help students use a richer range of vocabulary to express their ideas more clearly in essays:

Sets of these bookmarks can be printed off, laminated, cut out, and then shared with students to keep in their planners or textbooks.


Student bookmark: vocabulary for essay writing


Use “EyeSay!” to give visual feedback on student essays

EyeSay!” is a new tool I have coded at to help students and teachers get a useful visualisation of essay style and structure.

Students simply copy and paste their essay from a word processor, and then the web application colour-codes its central stylistic features.

For students, it helps them develop their writing – They can use it to spot whether they are using a range of sentence lengths, quotes, dates and terminology.

For teachers, it is a useful marking tool –  you can use it to quickly identify whether the essay uses key evidence, linking words and statistics.

Taking it further

It is also possible to view the essay’s opening topic sentences in isolation. If these thesis statements are written well, then taken together they should provide a coherent overview of the entire argument. If not, they should be edited further.

The EyeSay! application could also be used in conjunction with the ClassTools Keyword Checker to help students ensure they have included specific factual knowledge in their essays.